Looks like you threw every Flame Dawn card you have into that deck lol...
Okay, first and foremost, I'd say cut down your deck to 40. Seriously, it makes the deck much more consistent with a small but powerful set of options, while a larger deck has more total options but also more chances of getting nothing at crucial moments.
Second, your command zone could use a little work. Sacullas works from hand, so he doesn't need to be in the command slot. However, Bromich is absolutely deserving of a commander slot, since he's best played as soon as possible to get the most out of his attack buff. Other good commander choices include Kali, Knight of the Flame Dawn, and Infected Purifier, although I can see Aberion's apprentice working too.
In general, for a rush deck, you want to emphasise cards with speed. That means charge and instant effects are good, slow cards are not. That's why I don't recommend cards like Flame Ram or Pyr, Fortress of the Flame Dawn, since it's a lot of effort or time to get the effect going.
I have some suggestions, but they'll have to wait as I'm tired now lol