Well since this was necro-ed recently, i'll put in my 2 cents ^_^.
Great read, agree with almost everything you mentioned, especially Alpha One, his description is about as clear as muddy water in a swamp filled with snakes experiencing a thunderstorm.
I do disagree with Meditating Monk though.
Meditating Monk - His description now is pretty alright. The suggested change: 'At the end of the turn, if there are no characters in an opponent's assault zone'. The Monk shouldn't get his buff as long as an attack was made, but the change would make it seem that he would get a buff if an attack was made and the attacker dies, leaving the assault zone clear.
Other than that, its a pretty great read
. Felt like there was some nitpicking, but it was for the purpose of consistency across the cards so that's great i guess
. (Personally i wouldn't care if there was a 'you' in front of draw a card, but for consistency's sake i suppose ^_^).